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"I will," I said I got the distinct i ainst the Marshalls I wasn't sure I didn't want to be paranoid, but I just felt he treated me differently once he learned I married Luke Marshall of the Marshall Family fortune

Luke came back into the office and handedat my laptop screen to see what I had written

"What should I title the email?"

I showed hied "Direct is best I like Grade Appeal Request personally It says it all"

"Is my email too terse?"

I glanced at him to see his response

"It's terse, but I doubt he'd want it to be long winded Maybe if you indicated that you really enjoyed the course and was surprised that your grade was so low, he'd feel a little ive you a better mark Can you ask to rewrite it to his specifications?"

I shrugged my shoulders "I honestly don't know"

I revised the letter and subject matter

SUBJECT: Grade for International Relations: Directed Reading

I received rade for your class and was surprised at the final mark of B+ I really enjoyed the class and felt that the paper deserved a higher raduate work so far If you could let me kno I could improve the paper in order to receive at least an A, I would be rade stands, it will have a significant effect on my ability to keep my scholarship

Thank you for considering my request

Sincerely,

Alexa Dixon Marshall

"What do you think?" I asked, chewing on my thumb nail